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A character arc is a measure of how a character changes over time. These arcs are linear, which means they have a start and a conclusion. Character arcs are a significant aspect of any novel as they help clearly translate your character’s struggles and personal developments to your readers.
Unsure how to write a compelling character arc for your protagonist or other characters? Here are some tips to help you get started!
In order to create a compelling and successful character arc, you first need to recognise which type of arc is your character going to experience. Over the years people have developed various character arc types, however, there are three significant types every writer needs to be aware of when plotting their character’s story.
Positive character arcs are simply that—a character arc that results in a positive journey or development.
A majority of books and movies or other cinematic pieces feature positive character arcs. This is because everyone enjoys a happy ending. An ending that makes you feel fulfilled and excited for the protagonist’s journey, or brings tears to your waterline as you reminisce on how far they’ve come, and how much they deserve this positive ending.
A positive character arc doesn’t necessarily have to have a ‘’happily ever after’ however it needs to have a happy ending. If a character’s family was assassinated and at the end they get revenge on the antagonist who murdered their loved ones while developing themselves mentally, then that counts as a positive character arc.
When writing a positive character arc it’s important to keep a few things in mind, such as:
You need to end on a positive note. Things can be as chaotic as you want it to be, but you need to have a positive ending. Otherwise, you cannot define your character arc as positive.
Your protagonist needs to develop as a character. Whether that be mentally, emotionally, financially, etc.
Your protagonist cannot end up where they started. A character arc that ends in a full circle is more of a flat character arc than a positive one.
Just like a positive character arc, a negative one is very easy to explain. This is a character arc that is typically used when writing antagonists in the entertainment industry due to the negativity it brings. When writing a negative character arc for a protagonist you run the risk of making your readers feel unsatisfied or creating a ‘bad ending’.
Some examples of a negative character arc for a protagonist would be if the protagonist dies at the end of the book, or if the protagonists almost achieve their final goal but fail by a small shortcoming. Negative character arcs for a protagonist are usually implemented for the first few books of a series, especially in fantasy books.
Using a negative character for your antagonist is simple—they fail. The protagonist wins and the villain dies or gets locked up until their final moments.
When employing a negative character arc for a protagonist, here are some things to keep in mind:
They shouldn’t end up as a person similar to what they started off as. The point is to corrupt them, ruin them and turn them to the bad side. Perhaps even make them fall victim to the antagonists.
They can’t or will never achieve their long-term goal. Remember that goal you established at the start of your book? Your protagonist cannot achieve that. Or at least, they will never achieve it due to certain plot developments.
They lose someone or thing important to them. Negative character arcs for a protagonist are generally triggered due to the loss of someone or thing important to the protagonist. Maybe their mentor is murdered by the government, or their failure to achieve their goals makes them turn evil.
Flat character arcs are arcs that essentially lack any sort of arc. They are flat and begin and end with the character as the same type of person.
These arcs are generally used for side characters, but they can also be used for a protagonist. Think of characters like Sherlock Holmes, James Bond, etc. They go through several trials and tribulations, but even after it all their personality remains the same.
When writing a flat character arc it’s important to remember that your character cannot undergo any significant personality changes. Your protagonist can undergo such changes during the story, but they need to have a full circle by the end.
Once you’ve decided where you want your character to end up at the end, you now need to know how they will get there. You can achieve this by referring to your long-term goal and then breaking them down into short-term goals.
The protagonist is supposed to find a hidden jewel at the end of the book and discovers how corrupt their government is. Alright, now break that down into short-term goals that will help your protagonist get to their end goal.
Group these goals and they will become stages for your book, break them down and you now have chapter outlines to work with.
Playing with the details of your character arcs can help you easily plan out your book’s plot and set a steady pace. You can also use this as a reference sheet when working on your WIP.
Once you know the type of character arc you want and how you’re going to write it, it’s important to consider how this arc will impact your world. This includes your side characters as well as the general plot and layout of your world.
It isn’t necessary to have a character arc for every single character, but it is almost impossible for only two characters to have an arc within hundreds of pages.
Whether it be your protagonist’s mentor or your antagonist’s assistant, it’s important to take their stories and personal development into consideration. How does the story’s plot impact their outlook on the world or their personality? Do any of the minor antagonists turn out to be morally grey? Does one of the smaller protagonists end up betraying the protagonist out of jealousy?
Remember, your smaller characters are also human. It’s important to take their stories and arcs into consideration so you can create a detailed and comprehensive world.
A great example of this could be anime characters. Most animes tend to have separate backstories and endings for every character. These backstories and endings don’t have to all be necessarily revealed to your readers, however, as an author you need to know where you’re going with each of your characters.
One easy way to implement character arcs for your side characters is by using reaction arcs. I don’t know if this term has already been established, but I personally coined the term to refer to a character arc that is a direct reaction to another character’s arc.
Maybe your protagonist has a positive character arc and ends up becoming the most successful person in their field of work, but this results in a reaction arc for their best friend who turns bitter and has a negative character arc due to the way the protagonist’s story played out.
Reaction arcs differ from other arcs due to the fact that they cannot be achieved without establishing another character’s arc first. Following the above example, the best friend cannot become jealous and bitter until your protagonist’s character arc is established.
I hope this blog on how to write a compelling character arc will help you in your writing journey. Be sure to comment any tips of your own to help your fellow authors prosper, and follow my blog for new blog updates every Monday and Thursday.
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E.A. Deverell - FREE worksheets (characters, world building, narrator, etc.) and paid courses;
Hiveword - Helps to research any topic to write about (has other resources, too);
BetaBooks - Share your draft with your beta reader (can be more than one), and see where they stopped reading, their comments, etc.;
Charlotte Dillon - Research links;
Writing realistic injuries - The title is pretty self-explanatory: while writing about an injury, take a look at this useful website;
One Stop for Writers - You guys... this website has literally everything we need: a) Description thesaurus collection, b) Character builder, c) Story maps, d) Scene maps & timelines, e) World building surveys, f) Worksheets, f) Tutorials, and much more! Although it has a paid plan ($90/year | $50/6 months | $9/month), you can still get a 2-week FREE trial;
One Stop for Writers Roadmap - It has many tips for you, divided into three different topics: a) How to plan a story, b) How to write a story, c) How to revise a story. The best thing about this? It's FREE!
Story Structure Database - The Story Structure Database is an archive of books and movies, recording all their major plot points;
National Centre for Writing - FREE worksheets and writing courses. Has also paid courses;
Penguin Random House - Has some writing contests and great opportunities;
Crime Reads - Get inspired before writing a crime scene;
The Creative Academy for Writers - "Writers helping writers along every step of the path to publication." It's FREE and has ZOOM writing rooms;
Reedsy - "A trusted place to learn how to successfully publish your book" It has many tips, and tools (generators), contests, prompts lists, etc. FREE;
QueryTracker - Find agents for your books (personally, I've never used this before, but I thought I should feature it here);
Pacemaker - Track your goals (example: Write 50K words - then, everytime you write, you track the number of the words, and it will make a graphic for you with your progress). It's FREE but has a paid plan;
Save the Cat! - The blog of the most known storytelling method. You can find posts, sheets, a software (student discount - 70%), and other things;
I hope this is helpful for you!
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When fear, dread, or guilt gets sickening—literally—your character is consumed with a gut-clenching feeling that something is very, very wrong. Here's how to write that emotion using more than the classic "bile rose to the back of their throat".
This isn’t just about discomfort. It’s about a complete rebellion happening inside their body.
Their stomach twists like a knot that keeps pulling tighter
A cold sweat beads on their neck, their palms, their spine
Their insides feel sludgy, like everything they’ve eaten is suddenly unwelcome
They double over, not from pain, but because sitting still feels impossible
Vomiting isn’t just a stomach reaction—it’s the whole body.
Their mouth goes dry, and then too wet
Their jaw tightens, trying to contain it
A sudden heat blooms in their chest and face, overwhelming
The back of their throat burns—not bile, but the threat of it
Breathing becomes a conscious effort: in, out, shallow, sharp
Nausea doesn’t always need a physical cause. Tie it to emotion for more impact:
Fear: The kind that’s silent and wide-eyed. They’re frozen, too sick to speak.
Guilt: Their hands are cold, but their face is flushed. Every memory plays like a film reel behind their eyes.
Shock: Something just snapped inside. Their body registered it before their brain did.
Don’t just describe the nausea—show them reacting to it.
They press a fist to their mouth, pretending it’s a cough
Their knees weaken, and they lean on a wall, pretending it’s just fatigue
They excuse themselves quietly, then collapse in a bathroom stall
They swallow, again and again, like that’ll keep everything down
Even if they don’t actually throw up, the aftermath sticks.
A sour taste that won’t leave their mouth.
A pulsing headache
A body that feels hollowed out, shaky, untrustworthy
The shame of nearly losing control in front of someone else
A character feeling like vomiting is vulnerable. It's real. It’s raw. It means they’re overwhelmed in a way they can’t hide. And that makes them relatable. You don’t need melodrama—you need truth. Capture that moment where the world spins, and they don’t know if it’s panic or flu or fear, but all they want is to get out of their own body for a second.
Don't just write the bile. Write the breakdown.
Tears are powerful, but do you know what's more impactful? The struggle to hold them back. This post is for all your hard-hearted stoic characters who'd never shed a tear before another, and aims to help you make them breakdown realistically.
Heavy Eyelids, Heavy Heart Your character's eyelids feel weighted, as if the tears themselves are dragging them down. Their vision blurs—not quite enough to spill over, but enough to remind them of the dam threatening to break.
The Involuntary Sniffle They sniffle, not because their nose is running, but because their body is desperately trying to regulate itself, to suppress the wave of emotion threatening to take over.
Burning Eyes Their eyes sting from the effort of restraint, from the battle between pride and vulnerability. If they try too hard to hold back, the whites of their eyes start turning red, a telltale sign of the tears they've refused to let go.
The Trembling Lips Like a child struggling not to cry, their lips quiver. The shame of it fuels their determination to stay composed, leading them to clench their fists, grip their sleeves, or dig their nails into the nearest surface—anything to regain control.
The Fear of Blinking Closing their eyes means surrender. The second their lashes meet, the memories, the pain, the heartbreak will surge forward, and the tears will follow. So they force themselves to keep staring—at the floor, at a blank wall, at anything that won’t remind them of why they’re breaking.
A Steady Gaze & A Deep Breath To mask the turmoil, they focus on a neutral object, inhale slowly, and steel themselves. If they can get through this one breath, they can get through the next.
Turning Away to Swipe at Their Eyes When they do need to wipe their eyes, they do it quickly, casually, as if brushing off a speck of dust rather than wiping away the proof of their emotions.
Masking the Pain with a Different Emotion Anger, sarcasm, even laughter—any strong emotion can serve as a shield. A snappy response, a bitter chuckle, a sharp inhale—each is a carefully chosen defence against vulnerability.
Letting your character fight their tears instead of immediately breaking down makes the scene hit harder. It shows their internal struggle, their resistance, and their need to stay composed even when they’re crumbling.
This is written based off of personal experience as someone who goes through this cycle a lot (emotional vulnerability who?) and some inspo from other books/articles
prohintistery — very helpful for finding new words and other writing-related material
thesaurus — you can find antonyms, synonyms, and the meanings of most words here
the color thesaurus — here is a list of a variety of colors and their names
pinterest — helpful for mood boards, designing characters, capturing ideas in images
joyous, delighted, ecstatic, cheerful, elated, glad, gleeful, jolly, merry, thrilled, upbeat, overjoyed, jubilant
upset, depressed, melancholy, mournful, somber, sorrowful, pessimistic, sorry, unhappy, blue
fuming, raging, irritated, annoyed, bitter, enraged, irate, furious
fearful, afraid, anxious, panicked, panicky, startled, petrified, shaken, terrified
disintegrated, fatigued, tired
fat, full, gigantic, massive, enormous, tremendous, colossal, considerable, hefty, huge, sizable, substantial, full, immense
cramped, limited, meager, microscopic, miniature, minuscule, modest, narrow, small-scale, young, paltry, poor
attractive, beautiful, charming, cute, elegant, good-looking, graceful, handsome, lovely, neat, pleasant
repulsive, unattractive, hideous, grotesque, grisly, unseemly, unsightly, horrid, awful
displeasure, disapprove, aversion, disgust, loathing, hatred, enmity
approve, adore, admire, cherish, appreciate, love, dig, fancy, prize
effortless, obvious, simple, painless, straightforward, smooth, child’s play, light, basic
difficult, tough, troublesome, complicated, serious, heavy, rough, arduous, backbreaking
velvety, silky, smooth, spongy, fluffy, elastic, mushy, delicate, comfy, creamy, pliable
rocky, rugged, harsh, coarse, choppy, chapped
blazing, boiling, heated, searing, sweltering, warm, scorching, sizzling
chilly, freezing, icy, brisk, frigid, cool, wintry, frosty
dense, fat, chunky, broad, wide, massive, hard
skinny, slim, small, slender, gaunt, lean, fragile, delicate, narrow, meager
concede, comply, allow, concur, grant, settle, sign, set, recognize
clash, oppose, divide, feud, haggle, object, oppose, quarrel, quibble, dissent, bicker, contend
kind, cordial, fair, friendly, good, lovely, swell
rude, callous, dangerous, evil, malicious, nasty, vile, ugly, hard, vicious
big, boisterous, deafening, resounding, roaring, ringing, raucous, rambunctious, intense
muted, hushed, muffled, low, soft, reticent, noiseless
stiff, thick, tough, unyielding, sturdy, solid, hard, substantial, rigid
baggy, lax, relaxed, sloppy, slack, limp
appetizing, delectable, delightful, exquisite, heavenly, enjoyable, pleasant, savory
unpalatable, unappealing, unappetizing, unsavory, indigestible, inedible, savorless, nasty
female, lady, madam, beauty
male, gentleman, dude
house, shelter, dwelling, residence, mansion, apartment, shack, box, condo, building
alike, akin, analogous, allied, parallel, matching, equivalent, comparable, identical, related
soul, tune, opera, melody, piece, singing, chamber, measure, hymn, song
design, painting, illustration
article, book, piece, scripture, manuscript, story, passage, novel, reading, work
all synonyms found on www.thesaurus.com
black — black, shadow, jet black, ebony, crow, charcoal, coal, oil, raven, ink, onyx, soot, pitch black, obsidian, midnight
brown — brown, mocha, peanut, coffee, dirt, cedar, cinnamon, chocolate, brunette, pecan, wood, fudge, grizzly bear
red — red, blood, wine, cherry, apple, brick, crimson, ruby, scarlet, strawberry, maroon, rose
orange — orange, tangerine, fire, tiger, carrot, apricot, marmalade, citrus, pumpkin, basketball orange, ginger, deep saffron
yellow — yellow, blonde, blond, pineapple, butter, lemon, mustard, banana, corn, honey, gold
green — green, sage, lime, chartreuse, grass, fern, leaf or leafy, basil, pear, clover, green apple,
blue — blue, cobalt, sky, lapis, blueberry, azure, diamond, navy, royal blue, denim, cornflower blue, lobelia blue, river, ocean, lake, pool blue, sonic
indigo —indigo, deep indigo, royal indigo,
purple — amethyst, lilac, periwinkle, orchid, grape, hyacinth
violet — violet, french violet, pure violet
pink — pink, rose, salmon, fuschia, hot pink, bubblegum pink, cotton candy pink
white — white, feather, paper, bone, snow, pearl, eggshell, cloud, dove
thicket — a dense group of bushes or trees
grove — a small wood, orchard, or group of trees
underbrush — shrubs and small trees forming the undergrowth in a forest
undergrowth — a dense growth of shrubs and other plants, especially under trees in woodland
canebrake — a piece of ground covered with a dense growth of canes
chaparral — vegetation consisting chiefly of tangled shrubs and thorny bushes
woodland — land covered with trees
coppice — an area of woodland in which the trees or shrubsare, or formerly were, periodically cut back to ground level to stimulate growth and provide firewood or timber
hurst — a wood or wooded rise or hillock
hillock — a small hill or mound
copse — a small group of trees
bower — a pleasant shady place under trees or climbing plants in a garden or wood
deciduous — (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually
coniferous — conifers are a group of cone-bearing, woody seed plants. they are most diverse in warmer areas like tropical mountains, and are also found in the wild regions of canada and russia
bosk or bosque — a thicket of bushes; a small wood
woodlot — a woodlot is a parcel of woodland or forest, typically small in size, that is capable of supporting small-scale production of forest products
pine — an evergreen coniferous tree that has clusters of long needle-shaped leaves. many kinds are grown for their soft timber, which is widely used for furniture and pulp, or for tar and turpentine
oak — a tree that bears acorns as fruit, and typically has lobed deciduous leaves. oaks are common in many north temperate forests and are an important source of hard and durable wood used chiefly in construction, furniture, and, formerly, shipbuilding
birch — a slender, fast-growing tree that has thin bark, often peeling, and bears catkins. birch trees grow chiefly in north temperate regions, some reaching the northern limit of tree growth
mahogany — hard reddish-brown timber from a tropical tree, used for high-quality furniture
hinterland — the often uncharted areas beyond a coastal district or a river's banks
willow — salix, also known as willows, osiers, and sallows, is a genus of around 350 species of shrubs and trees that are usually deciduous. they are primarily found in temperate and cold regions on moist soils. the white willow is the largest species, with mature trees growing up to 25 meters tall
redwood — sequoioideae, also known as redwoods, are a subfamily of coniferous trees in the cupressaceae family. they are the tallest trees in the world and can live for thousands of years
elm — ulmus, or elms, are a genus of deciduous and semi-deciduous trees found across most of the northern hemisphere. they are known for their broad shade and vase-like shape
magnolia — a tree or shrub with large, typically creamy-pink, waxyflowers. magnolias are widely grown as ornamental trees
greenwood — a wood or forest in leaf (regarded as the typical scene of medieval outlaw life)
boskage — massed trees or shrubs
countryside — the land and scenery of a rural area
country — districts, areas, and small settlements outside large towns, cities, or the capital
backwoods — remote uncleared forest land
outskirts — the outer parts of a town or city
wildwood — an uncultivated wood or forest that has been allowed to grow naturally
sticks — an area in the country that is far away from towns and cities
he furrowed his eyebrows — in confusion or concentration
he raised his eyebrows — in surprise or skepticism
he narrowed his eyes — in suspicion or annoyance
he bit or pressed his lips together — in hesitation
his lips parted slightly — in shock or anticipation
he clenched his jaw — in frustration or determination
he tilted his head — in curiosity or disbelief
he wrinkled his nose — in disgust or disapproval
he rolled his eyes — in exasperation
he puffed his cheeks — in frustration or exhaustion
eye movements:
his eyes darted around — nervously
he avoided eye contact — out of guilt or shyness
he held eye contact — in defiance or intensity
he squinted slightly — in scrutiny
he looked down — in shame or submission
he glanced away quickly — in embarrassment
he stared blankly — in shock or dissociation
he blinked rapidly — in disbelief or surprise
his eyes widened — in fear or astonishment
he peeked through his fingers — when scared or hesitant
head movements:
he nodded slowly — in understanding or agreement
he shook his head — in disagreement or disbelief
he tilted his head — playfully or teasingly
he bowed his head slightly — in respect or submission
he tossed his head back — in confidence or defiance
he ducked his head — in embarrassment or shyness
he rested his chin in his hand — while thinking or bored
he jerked his head toward a sound — in alertness
he rolled his neck — to release tension
he tipped his chin up — in defiance or arrogance
hand movements:
he clenched his fists — in anger or determination
he ran his hands through his hair — in frustration or stress
he wringed his hands — in nervousness
he drummed his fingers on a surface — in impatience
he pointed — accusingly or demandingly
he pressed his palms against a surface — in desperation
he tugged at his sleeves or hem — in nervousness
he threw his hands up — in exasperation or surrender
he rubbed his temples — in frustration or exhaustion
he covered his mouth — in shock or horror
arm and shoulder movements:
he crossed his arms — in defensiveness or annoyance
he wrapped his arms around himself — for comfort
he shrugged — in uncertainty or indifference
he threw his arms out — in excitement or exasperation
he linked arms with her — for comfort or closeness
he rubbed his arms — to self-soothe or ward off cold
he flailed his arms wildly — in panic or excitement
he stretched his arms above his head — in relaxation or boredom
he held his arms behind his back — in restraint or formality
he used exaggerated arm gestures — when talking passionately
leg and foot movements:
he tapped his foot — impatiently
he crossed his legs — to appear closed off or comfortable
he bounced his knee — in nervousness or excitement
he kicked at the ground — absentmindedly
he shuffled his feet — in hesitation or guilt
he stood on his tiptoes — to see something or seem taller
he turned his toes inward — in insecurity or shyness
he stomped his foot — in frustration or excitement
he swung his legs — in a carefree manner
he stepped back instinctively — in fear or uncertainty
posture and general movement:
he stood tall with his shoulders squared — in confidence
he slouched — in defeat or boredom
he leaned in — engaged or interested
he leaned away — in discomfort or disinterest
he puffed out his chest — in arrogance or bravado
he shrunk into himself — in anxiety or fear
he rocked back and forth — in nervousness or impatience
he swiveled his body away slightly — in disengagement
he walked stiffly — in discomfort or tension
her hips swayed confidently while she walked
microexpressions:
a smile briefly flickered across his face
his eye twitched a single time — in irritation
he swallowed hard — when nervous or emotional
he slightly shuddered — in disgust or fear
he bit the inside of his cheek — in thought or frustration
he quickly inhaled — taken aback
he exhaled shakily after holding his breath too long
he clutched his shirt tightly — in anxiety
he tilted his head down slightly while still looking up (puppy dog eyes)
there was a fleeting look of longing in his eyes before he looked away
dog — loyalty, faithfulness, trust, companionship, pack mentality, family-oriented
cat — independence, aligity, mystery, solitude, curiosity, self-reliance
rabbit — fertility, luck, new beginnings, gentleness, purity
snake — temptation, evil, ill will
deer — grace, gentleness, renewal, vulnerability, innocence
fox — cunning, trickery, intelligence, adaptability, mischief, playfulness, tomfoolery
coyote — cleverness, creativity, trickery, playfulness, knowledge, an omen or a warning
wolf — intuition, wisdom, freedom, wildness
alligator — danger, power, strength, camouflage
elephant — memory, longevity, intelligence, sovereignty
horse — travel, spirit, adventure, transportation, hard work
seal — playfulness, happiness, joy, understanding
seahorse — good luck, magic, persistence, fortune, individuality
shark — power, authority, strength, predatory nature, protection
fish — abundance, perseverance, prosperity, peace, calmness, water
grizzly bear — strength, power, protection, a connection to the wild, healing
black bear — fearfulness, conflict-avoidance, mindful
polar bear — viciousness, coldness, protectiveness
panda bear — peace, gentleness, luck, friendship
red panda — patience, sensitivity, originality, non-conformity
bird — transcendence, messaging/messengers, freedom
worm — decay, death, cycle of life, regeneration, simplicity
bug — filth, transformation, decay, unpleasantness
sandalwood — think intoxicating, slightly masculine (if you want it to be), wood-y,
fresh laundry — think febreeze, freshly cleaned clothes, cleaning wipes, that kinda thing
cinammon — think cinnamon rolls, desserts, sugar, sweetness
vanilla — sweet and soft. it’s a classic and i feel it’s almost feminine because it’s in a lot of perfumes but it can be for anyone
sea salt — think sand on your feet, sea in your lungs, maybe a few seagulls cawing. a very beach-y smell
chlorine — think of pools, summer, theme parks with water slides. it’s not the most appealing smell but it certainly is a smell
strawberry — when i think of strawberries, i think of strawberry picking when i was little and kind of the taste of the strawberries themselves. as for the ice cream or perfume kinda strawberry, it’s a fun and sweet smell
chocolate — think hot chocolate, a hershey’s kiss, that hint of chocolate in your coffee creamer. it’s warm and cozy
coconut — think tropical, beachy, refreshing. when most people see coconuts they see “exotic”
banana — think banana sundae, banana smoothie, fruit-y smell, laffy taffy, that kinda thing
apple — think apple trees, apple jam, apple pie, that kinda sweet crisp smell
pine — think of a damp, dirty forest with towering trees and leaves gracing its floor. maybe a deer or two is nearby. it’s a forest smell basically
metallic — think of blood, wet copper or iron, etc.
dirt/earth — think the smell of dirt, grass, trees. the general smell of nature
rose — think romantic, date night, mysterious, alluring. roses are most commonly associated with life and affection, at least in american culture
sweat — think intense workout, maybe tangy, smoky, etc. just sweat
mint — think of waking up bright and early, toothpaste, doctor’s offices, etc. mint really speaks as fresh to me
damp, wet, wet dog — think of moist places, like a really old pool or something akin to that
dew — think early morning and mist in the air. can be associated with spring as well
musk — think of a scent similar to sweat, but the aftermath. not just pure sweat everywhere, but the scent about an hour after you work out. it smells different for everyone though
smoke — think of that scent you smell when a fireplace turns off, wood stops burning, or when you overcook something
spicy — think of ginger, paprika, spices in general. it’s a kind of fun and daring smell
toasty, warming — this can be anything warm you want: hot cocoa, warm blankets, turning the heater on, summer, fireplace flames
floral — this can be any flower you want it to be. spring is full of it, it is the embodiment of a bouquet, and is the scent you smell when you “stop to smell the flowers”
hospital
police station
school
fire watch tower
observatory
apartment complex
gas station
city hall
coffee shop
bakery
firefighter station
car dealership
college
high school
elementary school
middle school
university
park
research center
animal shelter
camp/wilderness camp
casino
blacksmith
bank
barber
armory
aquarium
dentist
general store
gunsmith/gun store
doctor’s office/medical store/medicinal supply store
jail
library
museum
farm
food store, like a pizza shop or ice cream store
stationary food truck
vacant lot
skate park
country club(s)
tennis court(s)
basketball court(s)
pool
warehouse
fast food restaurant
his brows knitted together
her lips pulled into a smile
the corners of her lips quirked up into a smile/smirk
her face twitched
a line formed between his brows
a look of happiness engulfed him
a look of sadness washed over him
his face contorted into a frown
his eyes drooped at that, and his lips pulled themselves into a frown
she raised a brow
she cocked an eyebrow
her brows furrowed
her eyes narrowed
her eyebrows shot up
his brows were tightly drawn together
alternatively, his brows were drawn together tightly
her entire face dropped
her smile fell
his eyes glittered with [any emotion]
his eyebrows pinched together
normal:
— stated
— spoke
— remarked
— reported
— added
questioning:
— asked
— inquired
— requested
— begged
angrily:
— demanded
— shouted
— growled
— yelled
sad:
— sobbed
— cried
— groaned
— bawled
nervous:
— trembled
— quaked
— stammered/stuttered
happy:
— exclaimed
— chirped
— laughed
— giggled
in preparation for nanowrimo, here are seven fun writing prompts to think about your novel in a different way. you don’t need to do any of these in order, and it doesn’t matter if you have the entire plot already planned out or if you’re winging it—just have fun or maybe fake it until you make it! who knows what will happen?
1. BREAKING NEWS! write a news article about an event that will occur in your novel
2. a portrait of… write a poem or a prose poem about a character or a location in your novel
3. the communion of food. construct a recipe for a food that will be eaten in your novel, a food that has significance to your character, or a food that exists in your novel’s world
4. WANTED. write a snippet from a piece of environmental or source material that your character will encounter but may not read in your novel. think about the way video games use environmental story telling. it could be a wanted poster, a post-it note, a journal entry, warning label—anything!
5. a letter to myself. write a letter from your character’s point of view to their younger or older self. what are their regrets or hopes? what do they wish they had known?
6. the butterfly effect. change one plot point in your upcoming novel. write a short story illustrating the effects of that change, whether they occur immediately or weeks to years after
7. book report. who cares if you don’t know what’ll happen? make something up! pretend you’re a third grader writing a book report over your novel. it can be simple or whimsical or as detailed as you want! it’ll help you to think about the outline (or lack of) of your novel if you’re attempting to look at it objectively
happy writing! but most of all, have fun writing! don’t take this too seriously. writing’s supposed to be fun. you can go back and make it “professional” later. if you have any questions, our ask box is always open!