Thank You To Everyone Who Got Me To 500 Likes!
Thank you to everyone who got me to 500 likes!
More Posts from Davilovesty and Others
RAFAEL SILVA as CARLOS REYES “Bad Call” — 911: Lone Star, 2.08
THE IMPOSSIBLE
by davilovesty aka impackinapiece
CHAPTER 2 is now posted!
Lets find out how Carlos is doing...
@ronenstrand
@ronenstrand
RONEN RUBINSTEIN via Twitter: Smooooooooth operator 🕴🏻
Honestly? Thank god there’s no season 6. And I say that as a huge, huge fan. I’m honestly relieved I won’t have to watch TK as a SAHD (seriously, what the hell was that?), I don’t need to see a forced family dynamic (no, Carlos did NOT want kids), and Owen living away from his son? Absolutely not.
Thank god we have 4 almost perfect seasons and AO3 to recover.
Thank god.
THE IMPOSSIBLE
by davilovesty aka impackinapiece
Chapter 2 to be posted 4/12/25
What has Carlos been up to?
@ronenstrand
THE IMPOSSIBLE
by davilovesty aka impackinapiece
First chapter to be posted 4/10/25
@ronenstrand
I’m noticing a trend here. Comments and feedback on all the stories I’ve seen on ao3 seem to be simply giving praise. Who doesn’t love to hear praise on the story they’ve put so much work into? But here’s the thing… these comments and the feedback don’t seem to be giving much in the way of advice or constructive criticism to help the authors better themselves and improve their writing. THIS is the kind of feedback I crave!
Absolutely I love to hear praise! But I want to improve my writing. I want to know my readers are happy and being taken care of. Tell me if I could make the story more gripping. Tell me if it’s too mushy. Tell me if it doesn’t have enough raw emotion. Want me to make you cry? Let me know so I can rip your heart out. Want to laugh more? Tell me so I can toss in some silly moments or stupid jokes. Or do something so outrageous you’ll need stitches. Is the writing itself not great? I need to know so I can take a refresher course or something. Or give me an example of how to improve a paragraph or two. Be willing to hurt my feelings so I don’t end up humiliating myself later on. That’s true feedback. That’s what I want!
@ronenstrand @hopefulwonderlandrunaway
